I, hmm. I don't know how I feel about that. Definitely completely unbelievable, about as over-the-top as Death Note. But it was interesting.
I like ones like the Machap Construction one because it's not all "CHILDREN KILLED THEMSELVES BECAUSE POKEMON!!1!!", it's just a dark, interesting take on the plot. I like ones like that.
I am hard to please ._. but still, it was an interesting read.