It was fun for a moment, but it wasn't going to last here.
You are now leaving California.
If California's bad, it implies that "good" is Texas or something. Texas didn't manage to build most of the internet. I don't like how this emphasizes a turning-away from what California was supposed to be, to whatever wants to steal its place as the seat of American aspiration.
It should be "Brooklynite".
I've been sending "ur a faget lol" to the blog of the creator of Miserere for about six years now, maybe more, and I am not planning to stop.