You completely ignored the first part of my post when I said most. You have no response to it. Did I say all, no, I didn't.>Still anime
When you think of the typical, "anime look", panty and stocking isn't what comes to mind. The character designs of the main characters are that of a western cartoon. Did you read my previous posts? >Somewhat proper body proportions is what separates the art style typically used in Japanese drawings, which I know you are trying to emulate by the bug eyes, and western cartoons.
Do you know what the word typically means? Panty and stocking does does not look like a typical anime, it looks like a cartoon and it follows the design rules of a cartoon, so it does not matter that it is Japanese. Op's drawing however does not follow those rules. It is closer to looking like the type of style used in MOST anime.>So for some reason chibi doesn't count to you, it's obvious their head are almost as big/as big as the line of their shoulders
Chibi, "doesn't count to me", because I already talked about how op's drawing isn't chibi. Also, your examples suck because in none of them the head is noticeably wider than the shoulders. They're almost or just as wide, not far wider like in op's drawing. >Three of the those pictures have characters with proper shoulder proportions and one of them is in a chibish style which has its own rules like that head being more ovular in shape(where the difference between height and width is small) than egg-like.
Op's drawing does not follow the rules of chibi, so it cannot be called chibi. >your crusade against chibi
I do not have a crusade against chibi, and you only think that because you have a mental disability.>fanart it gets means no one likes it
Did I say that bottle fairy looking like shit was an objective fact? Also, just because something is popular, that doesn't make it good. My opinion on the show is irrelevant. Do you really want me to say that something is an opinion every single time that I say an opinion? Oh, wait, the exception to that is when i'm sucking off something, you don't need to say that it's an opinion when you do that. That's such an unbelievably stupid way to think. >Case Closed, Yotsuba
I don't feel like wasting more time on your pointless examples. In Conan, the characters with a bobble head are chibi. Even then, Conan's shoulders are almost straight and clearly defined unlike what's in op's drawing where the shoulders heavily slope. In yotsuba the main character has no shoulders for comedic effect. Op's drawing has a character who does have shoulders, but they are one not clearly defined and two the character is not chibi. Both of those examples don't justify Op's shoulders. In the type of chibi where the head is totally massive, the character practically doesn't have shoulders, in the type of chibi that you brought up in your examples, the shoulders are very straight and noticeable. Op's drawing does not fall under either of these two categories. I still don't get why your panties get in a twist so much when somebody shares a negative, "opinion". Is op's drawing perfect in your eyes? Is it? Because the whole point of this thread is to share what could be improved. You have contributed nothing to that.