oh wow, that art with the hair (and the illusion of pointy ears) reminds me of a certain character, but i can't put my finger on who…. huh…..>>391
DREAMSCAPE KNIVES GO
wait wait wait you drew this?
perhaps this would have been better suited for /o/ though… we dont really have a drawing projects board like lit and fg are…
I really like the hair. it's … real. it's fluffy. it has body. it feels like if i went out and touched it i'd feel actual hair. very very good job on that.
IF YOU REALLY CARE ABOUT ANATOMY:
the ears are a smidge high.the top of the lobe should be in line with the eyes, that's an easy visible marker for placement.
the nose is really small. noses are so hard to do well.
the hand is confusing perspective too. minimize the "wrinkle" marks on the thumb if it's straight up against the blade; alternatively, tuck it down.
the chin is pointy. round it off just a smidge, and give the jaw a tiny bit more body when you round it off. chins are like little balls. feel your face in the mirror and get a feel for it. speaking of rounding things off, her face looks kind of flat with that shading, round out her cheeks and she'll look either more alive or more dead, depending on how you want to make her look :3
the arm looks a little squished into the body, the one holding the knife, though. but the only way to fix that would be to shift the entire knife/etc toward the right or to angle the arm more sharply (more vertical) and have the wrist bent more extremely to keep it at the same level/position in the frame.