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Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?gxh0qegb2u4k8lu

Very Retrouvaille is sorta my first game. I made it in like, 2 weeks (more or less).
It’s made with rm2k3 and it's short and not too difficult. (some of the npcs can give hints too.)

You play as a little ram girl named Faraday who is trying to find her pet rabbit ’ - ‘.
Enjoy! I think the game is pretty decent for a first game… (Oh, and thank you to Chesir who beta tested it.)


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Faraday's house… (You can save via the main menu too.)


Reminds me a LOT of Melon Journey. I'm not a huge fan of the whole fetch quest game thing but the art and music are nice. And props for using Bach in the title screen.


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>(Oh, and thank you to Chesir who beta tested it.)

Oh, you're welcome. After all your game is really lovely; I enjoyed testing it.


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I saw that Chesir beta tested it and immediately went to look for the Uboachan thread.
Man, that was adorable but that ending was sad. I guess it's kind of to be expected, though…I mean, why would your rabbit be anything other than 'asleep' if he ran into a dangerous forest? Also, I relate to Shampoo Deer on a personal level.


Woah, awesome! Downloading to play later because I'm gonna be on a plane soon.


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oh man is that some gymnopedie? delicious

overall i thought it was pretty good. the graphics weren't half bad, and i liked how faraday seemed to handle her pets death with grace and dignity when she gave its grave flowers. even if it was probably by the time she had gotten past the sadness. it still sucked when i saw the grave, even if it was pretty obvious.

i'm a little bit worried about whoever was asleep in the cabin and if they were really asleep or dead. i also worried about if the mayor was dead or not for a minute.

i've always liked the mono-color style of very pink game, melon journey and this game, and how pastel they were. maybe i should try it out when i remake my first rpgmaker game.

also the year of luigi and passion pit refs were pretty cute. was the music sheet collection tidbit a reference too, i wonder…?

anyway have some fanart


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Really nice game! Just played it and really enjoyed it; I especially liked the art and humor. I liked the references and little similarities to other games as well; I definitely got a bit of a Melon Journey and Earthbound vibe at times. Also, I know you didn't make the music, but I feel you really picked some good song choices; they all fit well, and helped enhance the game's relaxing atmosphere.

I did notice a few small errors though, so I'm just gonna go ahead and post those so you can go ahead and fix them. The included screenshot it just a small passibility error which I noticed with most of the non-examinable windows.


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This one's just a graphical priority issue with the right sides of the trees at the edges of the various maps.


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Just a small typo here; "past" should be "passed".


I can't get into the cabin T.T
I just can't T.T



Me neither, though I figured that was intentional. I definitely felt curious about what I'd see if I could enter, however.


I'm a derp and you should tell me where to go



at the screen south of the cabin, you need to head northwest, rather than north; there's a second pathway there.


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Hngh this game 0A0

I don't know why I didn't see that ending coming. I mean it's like >>2393 said if the forest was dangerous and all…

but the graphics are so super cute even if they seem reminiscent of Melon Journey. The game was super cute and fun. I just wish I could have seen all the residents. I was excited to meet the penguin and then it's all like "no response" all my sadness ;v;


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Thank you!

Yeah, I used Gymnopedie a lot in the game… Ahhh, thank you! This is the first fanart of the game <3 (' q ').
>was the music sheet collection tidbit a reference too, i wonder…?
Nah, it's not, anyway thanks for downloading the game!

Thank you very much! I'll fix them…
didn't notice that spelling mistake oops

I forgot to put an event that gave the message "I don't want to disturb the person sleeping." Sorry;;

Thank you! I'll try to draw the other residents who didn't make it in the game 'u'.

+lamb's face (which I drew for someone)


Well, Op, nice at first glance.


I hate you and all other people in the world who can make this high quality of a game in only a few weeks.
It would take me that long just to do a sprite…


This game is pretty cute and I liked it overall. The choppiness of the text bothered me a bit though (how automatic it was). Maybe it's just me because I like to be in control of the text in games. Anyway, good job.


Have you made any games in the past? Do you plan on making any games in the future?
You seem to have a knack for this sort of thing after playing this.


This was a pretty cool game!
My only critique stylistically is to beware in the future of light colored sprites on a light colored background- on everything else you did it pretty stellar.
My favorite was Lamb. (.///.)


I sort of wish you could see the gallery without having to either save just before the climax or replay the whole game, but I liked it otherwise. Pretty cute.


Really nice game! This really reminds me of melon journey. It would be awesome if it was longer, will you continue updating it?

I don't want to sound like an asshole but I think removing enterbrain's logo is not ethic, even if you mention you used rpgm2k3.


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1000+ downloads pic.

Thank you all for the feedback & advice!
(and I like lamb too |・ω・`))

>will you continue updating it?

Maybe? But I think I'll change the ending to the original one I planned for the game (though I think the originally planned ending is bullshit aha)


Ah, thank you! I'm making another game rn actually…


Off topic, sorry, but god that picture hurts my heart. Don't be sad, tiny Calliope. ;_;
More on topic, I might draw some fanarts too if I can get my scanner to work. I'm a sucker for ram girls, and all of those character designs were super cute.


It's a really cute game - the art is cute, most of the music you use is very cute, a lot of the characters act very, very cute (even if they try to act tough).

It's good for a first time.

I'm not a big fan of fetch quests though.

I just wish you were a bit more careful with your color palette for the sprites, because most of the time, they end up being the same color as the ground - it's just a minor faux-pas.


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Ahh, thank you!

Thank you! I'll try to be more careful.


Played the game right now, was neat.

Some thing:
You can ask the guy about the phone number after giving it to him. You can also get "Go to the mayor now" from another character after already seeing her.

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