The creases in the jumper are pretty good if you didn't trace them. You shouldn't count your drawings like that though. If you want to count them you should do it by number of sketchbooks filled up. Someone who's put in the work every day to become good is infinitely more impressive than any talented beginner.
tits too big
I think the intention was to have the volume of her torso squeezed out into her breasts and ass, it's a stylistic choice.
mado is a flat queen!