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 No.992

What is some advice or ways I can improve as an amateur poet?(written avlot of Shakespearean sonnets, one Italian styled one, a few haikus and Tankas, one acrostic, limerick, and villanelle) at least quality wise

 No.993

>>992
read rilke

 No.994

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>>992
Post a few so we know what we're working with

 No.995

>>994
ok, here's 3 recent ones(haven't touched poetry for a few months)
Blank Canvas:
Finally a place for my dreams to fit

A close acquaintance is to humbly thank

For the very reason here do I sit

An ancient unopened canvas still blank

Methodic blueprints I think and ponder

As the beloved canvas starts to age

Stuck here, mind forced to endlessly wander

Suddenly in a melancholic cage

Sorrow and anxiety on the rise

Mental lines soon shifting ugly and bent

As creativity’s pool rapidly dries

Passion and energy already spent

Like a cold rainy day bike left to rust

A lone canvas painted with only dust
2.coffee:
Darker than an ebony moonless night

I asked for a drink most sweet and frothy

With a taste and temperature that bite

Receiving, but a cup of black coffee

I tried to ask for some cream politely

But the rugged barista merely hissed

Then I tried to ask a bit more kindly

But was rudely threatened by their gnarled fist

My hopes for a soothing midnight latte waned

Sipping from the truculent man’s dark drink

Scolding heat caused my soft tongue to be pained

Causing me to reflect on life and think

Memories rising in my mind so fond

I must keep searching for more precious bonds
3.Puppet
A vast, wretched plain of infinite stones

Roam crude creatures of the faceless sea

Abyss of despair deep within my bones

Choosing to see only their perceived me

Wasn’t taught anything of patience or love

One law accepted of heart: dog eat dog

Watched the pointless butchering of the Dove

Enlightenment is cast into the fog

Rules strongly hammered and forced to follow

Unable to break free of my own strings

Left apathetic, alone, and hollow

Summoned by a demented king’s loud ring

Hope I try to find in the dark, now blind

As the cruel scarlet strings tightly bind

 No.1022

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>>992
Read about sympoiesis and Ursula K Le Guin's poetry in Arts of Living on a Damaged Planet

 No.1036

>>992
Get in here Anon!!!
- X

 No.1037

>>1036
what the fuck am i doing here?

 No.1038

>>1037
These fags delete things, anything can be discussed here, it old YN thing.

 No.1039

>>1037
The thing about radical removal of shit / crap software should be done in terms of calling out.
If something is bloated, it should be publicly shamed, humiliated and marked as untrusty…
- X

 No.1040

>>1039
simply doesnt work. no one cares. its like social justice, the only reason (((they))) were able to push it on the public (otherwise known as NPCs) is because they control the media.
im reasonably well of, but no where near to buy hollywood and manufacture anti-bloat propaganda

actually, reading back what i wrote, i guess zoomies are kinda different. they choose their poison to be youtube/tiktok…

 No.1041

>>1040
German politic group AfD did a rather funny way of propaganda. By TikTok whores, pretty girls showing feet or dancing with their logo in the background.
We can't hire whores to dance while holding K&R or ANSI C and singing "total tr* death" (but we can try?). But we can psyop them with images I believe…

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>>1040
This…

 No.1043

>>1041
dunno, the last time i saw mememagick was the 2016 election
has it ever worked since?

 No.1044

>>1043
I know, I was there on p** at the time…
I don't think it hurts to try, but one thing is sure:
P*st tr**** will seethe and d*late… It'd be fun.

 No.1045

>>1042
for one the contrast is terrible
>flod detected
this is pseudo-opsec to begin with, but their r9k getting into to way makes it even less viable

 No.1046

do you know that one guy who posted pictures of real women on *specific* subr*ddits in hopes of getting rope assists?

 No.1047

>>1046
No clue, I never went to Plebbit…

 No.1048

>>1045
>>1046
Also, someone (one of us) should write "Real Men Don't Write Pascal", but for C, with pointing out CVEs in Pust, bloat of LLVM, bloat of clang (and gcc sadly), shit that memelangs offer, "false features", etc.(USER WAS WARNED FOR DERAILING THREAD)

 No.1049

>>1047
no, its like a famous 4chan screencap from the guy reporting in
whatever…

 No.1050

>>1048
it would have to read like a cartoon or the FDD manifesto.
we do have "Some Were Meant For C". i found it insanely good actually.
ugh, what do you think, what would it require to convince ${GLORIOUS_CULT_LEADER} to make an audio book version?
looking at him, because hes the only one who doesnt have an insanely thick accent(USER WAS WARNED FOR DERAILING THREAD)

 No.1051

>>1049
In any case, I need to think about it more, and I do think we really, like really really, need our minimal C compiler.
I wouldn't want it to comply to any standard, fuck POSIX, fuck UNIX, fuck GNU, fuck WG14. Our own thing, without useless crap.

I'm back to writing XCB/Vk, this page is always opened in my browser, I check messages every 30-60 minutes.

 No.1052

>>992
Practice! Any time even a small piece of a line pops into your head and sounds good, write it down and try right there to grow it out like a seed. The few words sprouting through your subconscious are attached to some concept you can expand if you get right on top of it while it's fresh.

Other times I write down an idea and then ruminate on it for years before suddenly finishing it.

There is another time that while driving down the highway I took the names of a few different exits and used those words as the basis to grow out a poem, and I really liked how it turned out. You can pull ideas from anywhere.

The more you practice the more you will understand your personal sense of literary aesthetic and how to appeal to it more effectively.



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