Okay, I write pretty regularly. Lately, though, I've been experimenting with more stuff that evokes a little bit of eroticism in depictions of youth, preteens. I think I'm seeing how far I can go in order to prepare for a story I'm planning about a hikikomori girl, without making it come off as pervy (there will be situations where she's judging her body in a mirror).
But these stories probably *do* come off pervy. Uboachan should eat them up! So, enjoy.
Tell me if you think they're obvious pedo-glorification, or if they come off as sappy or clunky, or if you honestly enjoy it. I'm not planning on doing anything with these stories, just doing some writing exercise.
This one's rather long, 4,000 words, and is kinda sappy, but tell me what you think:http://pastebin.com/e76ASL3p