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No.4520

…or at least a fanfic.

I was watching Let's Plays of Siren Blood Curse, and the MC of the game (Howard Wright) reminded me of Scott in terms of his clothes and what I thought he'd sound like. And Blood Curse inspired me to write this up.

And so, here's the story I'd like to develop.

Jackie (Calalini) is a schizophrenic girl, who goes into a whole hallucigenic attack where her thoughts cannot be suppressed by her own field of hallucinations. Therefore her new hallucinations, the Dream Eaters, are released into the real world. Their only objective is to kill people and eat their hopes and dreams, leaving them as bloody carcasses and vessels of ordinary human organs.

Those dead people become Dream Eaters themselves, and hunt down every other human so the world would all be Jackie's.

And then there's Scott(Umbra). He's walking home from somewhere (this is before the blizzard) and he encounters a Dream Eater. He tries to kill it before it kills him with his bat and successfully escapes albeit with a scathed arm. So he goes to the hospital.

Jackie is admitted into the hospital, and meets Dokutsuki (Broken Bottles), a scientist-in-training who attempts to cure her. Doku fails, but she vows to stop her hallucinations. Irene (Looking Glass) and Nathan (Other Line) watch over Jackie (or something. Maybe not)

Doku runs into Scott, and she fixes up his arm. In order to repay her, he accepts taking her to places where Doku can get the materials needed to cure Jackie. Along the way they meet other people with nexuses and find the materials there. Like Me, Al, and the guy from Period and other people.

That's the basic plot. Pic unrelated. I know it's tl;dr. It'd be a giant crossover with the overseas fangame MCs.

Thoughts?

No.4521

This sounds interesting. I hope that this can be as good as the fanfiction written here: http://w.pensivenonsense.net/yumenikki/ Which I recommend to everyone. Each ending made me tear up. Even though I don't necessarily agree with all of the theories listed, I still enjoy it very much.
I hope to see further updates with this project. It's a good thing that I checked uboachan now since I don't check it very often anymore haha Good job with the outline.

No.4522

Feel free to add in some if your oen ideas. If I like it (which is ≈90% of the time) I could be able to incorporate it.

No.4523

Me is in it? That should be interesting.

No.4524

I'd like to make it a survival horror exploration game if I could, but I'm booked with FLUX already XD I guess it'll just be a fanfic.

Other people's hubs would be accessible. Like getting an Essence of Death from Eun's Hell or something.

No.4525

Like, Ao oni?

No.4526

Somewhat. Dream Eaters chase you and it's game over. But wouldn't that be really frustrating? Dream Eater Syndrome (or something. Calalini Syndrome?) would be an epidemic soon enough. And they'd be everywhere.

No.4528

Do you guys appeal to games or a first/third person story or both

No.4536

Hmmm, it would be pretty hard to incorporate Hell Diary's events into the events in other games. Mostly because the game takes place in a different time and on a different planet.

Not that I'm against the idea, but it should be handled very carefully if you want to keep it from sounding too weird (especially if it conflicts with the events in the game when it is released.)

No.4537

>different planet

Wait what

EUN IS ON ANOTHER PLANET?!

I wouldn't know when Umbra takes place. And Looking Glass looks like 90s to me or something.

Then again it is an effect of Jackie's hallucinations that escaped so maybe it affects the world too? Anachronism Screw maybe

No.4538

http://calalinisyndrome.tumblr.com/

Where it's being serialized at. I might turn it into a Google Docs thing

No.4539

The Looking Glass takes place in modern times. When Hell Diary takes place doesn't really matter much because it takes place so far away, but it is roughly analogous to the mid to late 1980s in terms of computing technology.

No.4550

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I can't stop listening to the title music hnnngh

No.4557

Why don't you…
Cut out the aspects of Yume Nikki.
Don't make it a fan game.
Create your own characters instead of using other people's.

No.4560


No.4561

>>4557

It's not a fangame, it's a fanfiction. Which is a step down in my book; shouldn't you be working on your game or something? I mean, I know you're switching computers and all that, but there was plenty of time to get a 0.00 or a few previews out, considering you expressed that you weren't making the tilesets.

No.4562

Unfortunately I have tests and stuff to do.

I'll put the fic in /lit/.

No.4566

How did you find out the characters' last names?

No.4568

Hey, have you actually asked Cien for this permission? She's the one who made the song of Calalini, after all, and created Jackie and what goes into it.

Plus there is already a Yume Nikki fangame coming out for Calalini. |:

No.4571

>>4568

Judging by the last two questions asked at the games devblog, it seems like permission was ecstatically granted.

http://calalini-devblog.tumblr.com/

No.4575

>>4566 I asked Bleet and Rusch.

>>4568 Yes.

No.4585

I came. That's everything I can say.

I love the idea, have the full support of this anonymous commenter.



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